First — Strong narrative arc that’s well seen and good moments. The last three frames feel redundant. Would be stronger if it ended with just one photo of teammate embracing coach. Be careful with crops — try to keep photos horizontal or vertical. Great job capturing activity under the rainbow. Nailed the overall frame overlooking the whole field.
Second — Great job at getting so many different angles and frames of one situation. Photos have great texture, I.E. texture of wood and sharp metal pieces of organ. In general, the pictures come together to give you a real sense of the work involved to take care of these ancient organs.
Third — This photographer did a nice job at finding different storytelling moments in the storm, but there is a lot of redundancy and would have benefited from a tighter edit.
Judges Comments
First — Strong narrative arc that’s well seen and good moments. The last three frames feel redundant. Would be stronger if it ended with just one photo of teammate embracing coach. Be careful with crops — try to keep photos horizontal or vertical. Great job capturing activity under the rainbow. Nailed the overall frame overlooking the whole field. Second — Great job at getting so many different angles and frames of one situation. Photos have great texture, I.E. texture of wood and sharp metal pieces of organ. In general, the pictures come together to give you a real sense of the work involved to take care of these ancient organs. Third — This photographer did a nice job at finding different storytelling moments in the storm, but there is a lot of redundancy and would have benefited from a tighter edit.