National – December 2020 – Photo Story/Essay

Judges Comments

First: photo 7 in this series is so strong. It was really lovely- a little standard- maybe couldve lost the last 2 photos. second: such a fun graduation essay- lose the last photo its repetitive to the one before it. third- OK. This has some beautiful photos. It couldve and shoulve probably been first but its soooo long. Like 6 photos too long. If you lose #5,6, 8,12,13,14 itll be so strong.

Judges: Sammy J Hester/LA Times, Calvin Alagot/LA Times