1st Good variety of images, use of composition and light. Peak action could be stronger. Well edited. 2nd Toss out half these images and you'll have a much stronger essay. Story isn't as focused as it could be. (Too many faces, pick one and tell their story.) 3rd Great subject that's not the easiest story to tell visually. Could use a tighter edit to avoid redundancy. Would have liked to see a bit more of the human element with the houses.
Judges:
Drew Nash/Times-News, Pat Sutphin/Times-News
Judges Comments
1st Good variety of images, use of composition and light. Peak action could be stronger. Well edited. 2nd Toss out half these images and you'll have a much stronger essay. Story isn't as focused as it could be. (Too many faces, pick one and tell their story.) 3rd Great subject that's not the easiest story to tell visually. Could use a tighter edit to avoid redundancy. Would have liked to see a bit more of the human element with the houses.