Overall, this was a weak category. Only the first place entrant told much of a story. The others seemed like daily assignments that were way too loosely edited. Both 2nd and 3rd places would have benefited from much, much tighter edits. We were surprised to see so many poorlywritten captions across all the categories. Incorrect spelling, bad grammar and punctuation problems were spotted everywhere.
Judges:
Mike Morones/The Free LanceStar, Peter Cihelka/The Free LanceStar, Suzanne Carr Rossi/The Free LanceStar
Judges Comments
Overall, this was a weak category. Only the first place entrant told much of a story. The others seemed like daily assignments that were way too loosely edited. Both 2nd and 3rd places would have benefited from much, much tighter edits. We were surprised to see so many poorlywritten captions across all the categories. Incorrect spelling, bad grammar and punctuation problems were spotted everywhere.