Jon Menell - Well covered with nicely worked shots and perspective. A little longer than needed. Final 20 seconds seemed redundant. _____________________________ Becca Habegger - Here’s a great example of a standard day-turn that good editing turned into an enjoyable and interesting piece. The solo journalist made great use of natural highway sound and used that to interact with shots, via quick cuts and natural sound bridges. Commendable effort in the variety of shots and interviews. Overall good pacing. We felt the story could’ve been a tad shorter.