Angelica DonesJudges Comments
- VERY NICE. Love the spray can nats at the begining...subtle but effective. The audio mix was perfect...none the bit overbearing....and perfectly woven. love the guitar music and the pacing to it throughout and at the end. - Great Job, loved the story it's obvious you put a lot of work into it. - Very well done, the audio was great, the shots were great, all in all great story.
Chad NelsonJudges Comments
- I just LOVE this story. Well shot. My critique is the audio. Lots of nice audio but FORCED into place like when I TELL YOU this with CAPITAL letters. Ease those ambient nats in a litle smoother. They don't neccesarliy have to go to -12db (if that's your avg level for speech) but should ride at a level that you know it's there but don't NOTICE it's happening. GREAT STORY! - Great Story! There were parts where the audio transitions needed to be smoother. - This story was shot very well, lacked some audio fades it needed, but all in all good stuff.
Brandon MowryJudges Comments
- Nice story. Nice structure with the reveal of the old/new superintendent over the course of the story. Nice look on all the interviews with the lighting from the lit super to the sun on the kids outside. Nice use of the secondary, gopro, camera on the pole up high. - Nice use of audio, nats, all the way through. - Great story. Solid editing, shot composition/variety was realy nice, and good use of natural sound. - Great shot variety, You found great nats to use, even something as simple as the shopping cart in the beginning
Kevin SullivanJudges Comments
- Love the reveal. Well shot. Well executed. On point. - Solid Story really enjoyed watching it. - This was my kinda story. Loved it! Well shot, great nats. All in all great