Ted NelsonJudges Comments
- This was an overall great piece. Good job all the way around. - I think the close shot should have been the chair with a line to that. Other than that the story was very well done. Nice editing, pacing and shooting. - Loved the gopro use throughout, really liked the shooting. Really nice job.
Stephen ClapperJudges Comments
- Great shooitng and good pacing. Good opening shot. - Really liked the opening shot and the pacing throughout the piece. Thought it was kind of jaring jumping from inside to outside, but still a solid job. - The open standup and following shot, make it different. Too similar with the foreground. I like the church angle to the story, but it seemed to go inside and outside too much. was hoping for a stronger close. good effort.
Jason SteusseyJudges Comments
- Great opening & closing shot. Cleanly done and good pacing. Well done. - Great nats to open, loved the pacing and car transitions. Really liked the closing shot. - good story, pacing was really good. got to the point quick and story was well told. the ending could have come back full circle. nice close shot. nice shot selection. would like to see some more shots from a distance with good mic work. keep it up!
Josh StephenJudges Comments
- I would like to have heard from the city. holding someone accountable. too one dimensional. i could tell you were running out of video toward the end. you did a great job on your end, but you have to get the other side to tell a complete story or show the viewer you and your reporter made an effort. - Very nice job in a tough situation with no video. Really liked the sequences and nats, seemed liked you shot it everyway you could.