This is an important story. I appreciate all the voices that were worked into it considering the deadline! I’m really glad that local news sources are around and able to cover events like this! This is one of those stories that wouldn’t necessarily be picked up by a major outlet but has tremendous meaning for a community. I think you did a nice job with the opening, having us hear the bagpipe before we see it and building out the scene with details. Some of the shots are a bit shaky so I’d try to have a steady hand if you’re going to film without a tripod.