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7 8 7 7 Love the parallel park. Great technical skills displayed on this story. Audio was great. Only thing I wanted to see more of was a long time customer getting emotional. Great job!
8 8 7 8 NIce work!!! I really liked the pacing and you got great sound. I loved the moment with the woman who was going to freeze the doughnuts. Awesome!
4 5 5 5 The problem I have here is if you are going to enter a protest story it really has to stand out, make me feel it. I didn't feel on this story.
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6 6 5 5 Liked the theme of two different types of protest. I thought it would end up violent but was suprised when it was peaceful. Wanted some more natural moments and not talking head interviews.
8 8 8 8 Dude, solid work. NIcely done. I really liked it for what you had to work with.
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7 7 7 7 Ending sound with the veteran was powerful. Nice job with limited access.
7 3 3 3 You have the makings of a great story here but I wanted to see build up with the giving of the gift. Show me how they choose the person, build it up.
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6 4 4 4 NIce job capturing the emotion of the woman receiving her gift. That was great reaction. Why did they decide to give the gift to that woman? Maybe show the process of them deciding to make it a better story.
